Editing Workshopping! (Canvas) (section)

= Workshopping =
''Here be discussion''

Training on the dyson sphere seems to involve rats and shapeshifting of some nature.

Salvador was not always sentient (maybe not always sentient ai)
lower peoples as part of  a twist

emile and kallisto interact very little but exhibit a gothel rapunzel vibe

tying the dyson into the artificial sun also allows a syndicate tie-in

dundra and emile reunite.

banquet AND masquerade

tamnayal's scene 1 involves "Kallisto" and "the rest of the story" on fire.

dundra got mild contrarian vibes.

Dundra showing up in some way helped Emile "change their views about the war". 

The Syndicate in some way gave the appearance of wanting others to join their (cultlike) movement after conveying that Salvador is accepting of all species.    

It's suggested by Wink that Dundra potentially being held in The Compound is tantamount to a plot hole because he isn't human. But then Flippers says they writers have been pretty good about keeping plotlines tight, and wonders if maybe there's something going on "between the LPC and the Syndicate", meaning that those two organizations being in cahoots means nonhumans or at least Gronks like dundra are more likely to be kept in the compound.


''discussion, FROM discussion:'' 

The reasons for the Gronk invasion are not explicitly outlined in the show (yet. They are found in the art book). I mention this is (maybe) because they refuse to ever speak ill of their sun, which is what is causing their problems.  

"Salvador called to us, Salvador CHOSE us, Salvador promised us prosperity that our own Tristian was unable to provide!" is a quote from the rally speech at the/a Gronk launch of some kind, implying either that other Gronks are receiving Salvador's call, or Dundra received the call without the order/suggestion to betray their people, and passed that along. 

== Unintegrated ==
Humans were on radio comms with Dundra and only later realise they are a Gronk. (Presumably, this is also a reveal to the audience)

Several pages have ooc notes that are unresolved. They are:
* [[Tamnayal]]
* [[Emile]]
* [[The LPC]]
* [[Gronks]]